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Posted: Mon, 22/06/2015 20:28 (8 Years ago)
They're so adorable together. I feel like Callie needs a protection squad. I see a lot of 'she might be the actual villain of the story' on some sites. She's a Muse of Space and what reason would she have to hurt anyone?

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Posted: Mon, 22/06/2015 18:17 (8 Years ago)
It was. Just read the latest update, I'm squeeing over how adorable Callie and Roxy are

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Posted: Mon, 22/06/2015 14:58 (8 Years ago)
That was the most adorable part of the update. The new update looks pretty good as well

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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 19:10 (8 Years ago)
I like the idea for Chorda. She sounds kinda spooky.

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Orsteinbyr

A decent size port in the north, on the northern and eastern sides cliffs surround the town protecting it from the worst of the blizzards and the biting winds. To the west the oft frozen ocean stretches off to the horizon. To the south snow laden plains extend for as far as the eye can see. From Orsteinbyr's walls icicles extend down and the torches barely melt them. Within Orsteinbyr itself there is a longhouse, typical of the northern towns and villages, that is inhabited by Göran and his family, a smithy where his daughter works and several small houses where tanning racks are a common sight. A mine extends into the cliff on the northern side where iron and coal are mined. Residents of Orsteinbyr make their living by fishing, mining or most commonly raiding various cities and towns along the coast. In the winter months boats are dragged from the harbour out to the nearest stretch of water and in the short summer months the boats are oft launched from the harbour itself.



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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 18:47 (8 Years ago)
Thanks! The likelyhood is I'll write it down here but the bare bones will go into the story as it's told from one of the characters who lives there. It's not useless ^-^ I info dump a lot (see my sample, it's fairly info dump heavy XD)

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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 18:33 (8 Years ago)
That's sounds awesome! It's sad that we rarely see fae in fantasy any more. They have such awesome lore surrounding them!

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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 18:26 (8 Years ago)
Ooh that sounds awesome! I'm working on a description for a port in the world I'm writing, it's in the Northern most regions of the country so it's super cold. (totally inspired by Game of Thrones ;-;) I just want to make it interesting so people don't feel like 'ugh another description'

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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 18:11 (8 Years ago)
Yay! It's nice to have people to bounce ideas off. I love those writing challenges, my favourites are the ones where you have to write a story based on a song within the time limit of the song :D

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Posted: Sun, 21/06/2015 18:05 (8 Years ago)
Hehe, I missed writing, are we allowed to post things that aren't prompt inspired or are world building for our own stories cause I'd like to bounce a few ideas around?

Also hi Eevee!

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Posted: Thu, 18/06/2015 19:56 (8 Years ago)
That's really good! You could have her come into contact with people see where it goes from there?

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Posted: Thu, 18/06/2015 19:28 (8 Years ago)
The turnout is awesome! I should probably carry on writing now or at the very least world building.

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Posted: Wed, 17/06/2015 18:19 (8 Years ago)
Yay! I'm going to work on my story I think, I'm doing a rewrite now so I'm happy with the first paragraph

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Posted: Wed, 17/06/2015 14:34 (8 Years ago)
I've had some good ones with lots of game chips but mostly berries :(

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Posted: Wed, 17/06/2015 13:36 (8 Years ago)
Hey, I'm a writer!
Username: TurnTechTimaeus
What I am looking for here: Critique and help with not info dumping all over the place
A sample of my Writing:
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The first paragraph from a story I'm currently writing:

The rain thundered down, coating the woman's seal skin coat. It was too muggy, too rainy in the south, she decided. The gates of the city came into view and the woman spurred her horse on.
"Who goes there?" A guard on the wall yelled, they had another trainee at the gate, she noted bitterly.
"I wish to speak to Lady Caterina. My name is Karsi Göransson." The woman stated.
"You sound awful like a woman for someone whose last name is Göransson."
"My father wanted a son, better to give his daughter a surname than to let his name die." Karsi muttered bitterly. The gate opened slowly and Karsi dismounted and allowed her horse free.


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I write far too much medieval fiction and when I type (I write on paper) I add details in, so what's written above has some edits, that I'm going to write into my actual work I think. :/ Thanks for creating this corner ^-^

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Posted: Wed, 17/06/2015 13:24 (8 Years ago)
Green mystery box with 3 Figy berries in. I was hoping for better

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Posted: Mon, 15/06/2015 19:16 (8 Years ago)
I think Rosemary is still around but I also know that Kanaya was flushed for Vriska and Vriska only returned that because Kanaya punched her in the face. I didn't watch the streams but I frequent the Homestuck forum on Reddit and saw it there, I wish I'd gotten into Homestuck earlier.

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Posted: Sun, 14/06/2015 14:15 (8 Years ago)
I really liked Roxy's arc as well but I wanted to see more of Dirk aside from his relationship with Jake and Jane as well aside from all the stuff with Calliborn and Jake. I know EmptyFeet on Youtube did a fantastic video called After Us about the ancestors.

I'm really looking forward to these next few updates because (SPOILERS AHEAD) I want to see what happens to Karkat (if he goes into the dreambubbles and sees GO!Vriska) and Kanaya, on the topic of Kanaya is Rosemary still canon?

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Posted: Thu, 11/06/2015 11:45 (8 Years ago)
I'm a JohnDave shipper but DaveKat is cool too. I'm super happy to see Calliope alive again and I want to see where it goes with her and Roxy. Calliope and the ancestors need lots of love in my opinion because aside from the Openbound flash we know very little about their session or them and Calliope never really had much development. Although saying that I feel most of the Pre-scratch trolls and the Alpha Kids didn't get much development either.

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Posted: Tue, 09/06/2015 16:04 (8 Years ago)
I loved those updates they were so sweet <3 At least it's still canon which is good!

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Posted: Mon, 08/06/2015 17:21 (8 Years ago)
Flareon, it looks so fluffy and I imagine it'd be nice to hug when you're feeling down

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