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1st piece- The (to viewer) right eye's position is a little awkward, while the face is too stretched overall. I'd add a little skin colour beneath the mouth, as well. His/their's (to viewer) left wrist and fingers could use a different look. On the other hand, the thumb is strange. His.. well, dunno how to call that on a children site?? Between the legs is too big, compared to 2nd piece. Nooow, onward to next, phew--

2nd piece- Eyes, nose and ears are clearly too big. Left wrist's finger that's vertical to thumb is almost as broken, and both thumbs are too short and flat. Legs are also too short and fat (I suppose he's/they're slim?).

3rd- I'd only fix lightning and shading here

next 2- saaaame as 3rd

6th- The face is too blocky, and neck is too fat. Thingie between the legs is also too expressed, considering females' don't have it that big.

7th- again, blocky face and too big eyes this time. The hair is too much of a traight line, the accessory's lines shouldn't vary as it doesn't seem to be a stretchy material. Also, the line here looks like it's seperated. The blue shows how the tie goes underneath the purple part.

8th- proportions should be same; ears are diff, eyes go a little out of the way etc.

9th- the liquid looks strange, as it's solid cotton or something

10th &11th- proportions and shading/lighting again