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Cardboard_Spaghetti

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:40                                                (8 Months ago)
                                            

This is just an art dump for my pokeheroes fanart (so far have one ^^')

I'll be adding more in the future. I would love some critique too!

Anyway, here's a Leah!

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:44                                                (8 Months ago)
                                            

Hi there, I'm also a fellow artist in PH, and here are a few things I think you missed out. Leah's a girl right? So the hips should have a small type of curve to it, and where is your light located at? The color shading depends on where your light source is. (not saying this in a bad way, but you asked for critique, so I guess here?)

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                                                Posted: Wed, 09/08/2023 22:45                                                (8 Months ago)
                                            

Thank you! I'll work on that right now!

Is this better?

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                                                Posted: Thu, 10/08/2023 18:53                                                (8 Months ago)
                                            

Can I give some feedback too?

The light is a lil bit awkward, with just one big yellow strip and nothing else. I'd either put that layer on overlay or gradient the yellow