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blake_
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Posted: Fri, 16/07/2021 07:38 (2 Years ago)
Chapter I: Eyes

He wasn't aware of hitting his head, but Fog woke to darkness, total darkness. Rocks scraped his knees as he walked around blindly, unaware of where he was. Things brushed past his legs, causing him to shout in fear. Black tentacles creeped over his shoulders and grabbed him, pulling him to another area.

The tentacles released him and a small light flickered on. He looked at the light curiously and then another turned on, then another, then another. Fog realised with a sickening jolt that they weren't lights....they were eyes! Shining, amber eyes which looked at him with a piercing gaze. He took a step back and tripped over a stray tentacle, sending him sprawling into another one. They picked him up and dangled him in the air. They squeezed him and he began to choke and cough, his face turning red then blue.

His head drooped down and he collapsed, still being held by the writhing tentacles. It dropped him on the floor and withdrew back to the darkness, leaving Fog lying on the ground. Fog opened his eyes but all he could see was blue, a grey-blue like the colour of DD's eyes.

Eyes blue like the Atlantic

Seeing the colour made his eyes fill up with tears as he remembered his love and all his friends. His limbs felt stiff and his head heavy, he couldn't move. He felt a weird sensation spreading over him...

and I'm going down like the titanic

A sensation where he was falling...falling into and endless pit of pain, as pain creeped along his body, making him scream. He couldn't hear himself scream, only a faint buzzing noise. His vision began to go blurry, fading in and out. Darkness clouded him again.

It wasn't all romantic

It could've been, if we were in a different world, Fog thought. He couldn't see anything now, only a world devoid of colour or light. It could've been, his mind seemed to echo. In another world....another place. His energy seemed to leave him and he became drowsy and then...silence

It was their farewell message as they signed off

Farwell....he seemed to think.

Eyes blue like the Atlantic and I'm going down like the tit-
Eyes blue like the Atlantic and I'm going down like the tit-
Eyes…

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Posted: Fri, 16/07/2021 09:35 (2 Years ago)

Title: Chapter II: Falling and Betrayal.

His eyes darted open suddenly, and there he was...teetering off the edge of a cliff. Behind him was a familiar face. "DD?" he whispered, his face suddenly overcome with joy. He walked up to her, arms wide open as if to embrace her. With a quick movement of her hand, DD suddenly pushed Fog. As he fell into darkness, Fog looked at DD one last time, an expression of absolute shock etched on his pale face.

The world started turning blue and everything vanished. A crack opened in the earth and swallowed him whole, and he was falling...falling into darkness. Wind whipped his hair as he fell through shadow. A small white object glinted in the distance. There were hundreds actually. The same amber eyes suddenly appeared and Fog began to scream but no sound came out. He was falling into the creature's mouth. He was going to die. The white teeth bared angrily as Fog fell closer and closer. They opened widely, big enough for Fog to fit it. He was almost there, so close to being killed. And then, with a sickening, CRUNCH, the teeth closed together...
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Posted: Fri, 16/07/2021 09:41 (2 Years ago)

Title: Chapter III: A Fear

Blue. Again. Surrounded by blue. Surrounded by...the sea? Fog looked around, puzzled. Wasn't he just being eaten by a strange creature? He frowned. Suddenly, a weight dragged him under the waters. He looked down and saw a tentacle wrapped around his ankle. His eyes widened in horror, he thrashed wildly under the water but it was no use. The tentacle wouldn't budge.

He couldn't breathe. But how? he thought to himself. I have gills! I'm supposed to be able to breath underwater. Fog started to panic, he was slowly drowning. He hit the tentacle again and again but that only seemed to make things worse. After a few moments, he went still and was slowly dragged to the depths of the oceans.
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Posted: Fri, 16/07/2021 14:01 (2 Years ago)

Title: Chapter IV: It wasn't romantic

A limp body, being dragged to the bottom of the ocean. That's all that was left of him. No feelings, or memories of his past life. No heart to love, no brain to think, no arms to embrace. Slowly sinking down. It was going so well for him. He found love, had a happy life. Betrayal. That's what happened to shatter his life. Betrayal. By the one he loved. It wasn't all romantic but it could've been. In another world, another place. Not now. Not ever. His body hit the seabed with a dull thump.

The seabed turned glassy, then hard. His reflection was shown on its surface. A mirror. How peculiar. A tiny fish swam past him, but as it brushed his leg, its exploded in a cloud of blue dust. So did everything else, the world around him exploded into clouds of pale blue dust. He didn't see this of course, he was still a rotting corpse. Not for long.
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Posted: Sat, 17/07/2021 13:37 (2 Years ago)
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