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The Wall that Divides Us

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Posted: Mon, 09/02/2015 23:38 (9 Years ago)
This isn't a kid's type of fanfiction, you've been warned. This story works on two people's point of views, both first person. Hope you enjoy! Feel free to comment. Also, this will work on a 'whenever I have time' sort of thing. This will also be chapters and what not. Every chapter is 5 episodes long
Blue = Daniel's Team
Red = Macus' Team
Purple = Both Marcus and Daniel's team. (Third person)
Introduction
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"My name is Talon. Otherwise known as Daniel. I am 15 years old, and with my team. Sage, Connor, Elizabeth, Shade, and Auraora."
"My name is Marek. Otherwise known as Marcus. I am 15 years old, and with my team. Mike, David, Jessica, Jordan, Tiffany, and Martin.


Season 1
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E1 Chapter 1
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Episode 1: The Fight
"I've wondered why was the walls built. We're trying to survive the assassins." I said, looking at Connor. "We're trying to keep territory, that's what. Put on your hood. The civilians might find us." Connor replied, and we both put on our assassin hoods. We walked out of the gates, and entered the city."Hey, David. Let's go buy some food at the city. I was also eavesdropping on the neighbors. We can wound them." I said to David. "Are you kidding? We can kill some of their team. I hear they bring their warriors to buy food with them, put on the hoods and let's go with some men." David responded, and they put their black hoods on. "Sir, how much coins for these pigs?" Daniel asked, and the pig owner replied "Three silver coins." As soon as he said that, an attacker from Marcus' team swooped and air assassinated a soldier. "Crap!" Connor yelled, pulling out his swords. He rushed at David, and David pulled his sword too. Daniel and Marcus' stared, until they noticed their teams fighting, they decided to pull out their weapons. You see, both these people were fast and have reflexes, so they unleashed their hidden blades. Marcus lunged at Daniel, and they attacked. Everyone ran, dead bodies on the floor. Connor and David stabbed each other in the arm and collapsed. "Connor!" "David!" Both of them yelled, they sent their fists at each other, Marcus landed a few punches on Daniel, and tried finishing him, but Daniel blocked. Ripping most of his disguise. Daniel started stabbing Marcus, but Marcus stabbed back. The battled ended only four survived. Connor, David, Daniel, and Marcus. I walked back to the gate and walked to our nurses and doctors. My brother and I stayed there until we were ready. And our disguise makers were making another assassin suit, a good one. David and I went home to where the gates were, and we went into our hospital. "Please help us..." David said weakly, and we stayed. Waiting on our new suits.





E2
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Episode 2: Romance
"I better go with Jessica to... um.. buy food?" I said, trying not to blush. David allowed, tugged me in the ribs, "Go get her little bro." He whispered. Jessica and I put our assassin hoods on, which were blue and white.
"Hey Elizabeth, wanna... you know... go eat?" Connor asked his girlfriend, Elizabeth. "Sure..." she replied. Daniel, who heard sneaked on them. Connor, who was and still is able to sense a genetic family member, noticed Daniel. "Talon, go to bed, it's past your bedtime." Connor said, "I already told you Connor, I want to be called Daniel. I'm no longer Talon. We're no longer kids, Shadow." Daniel chuckled, and Connor swiftly punched him the gut. "Elizabeth, let's go." Connor said and walked off. Daniel decided to walk back to the gate. He saw Sage, "Oh gosh, I gotta look away." But as soon as he turned, A girl from Marcus' team, which looked beautiful, was in Daniel's eyesight. Her name was Tiffany. He was surrounded. He decided to walk towards Sage, his crush, looked at him with a 'are you okay?' look, he just smiled and walked towards the beds. She stayed quiet, and so did he.
Meanwhile, Jessica and I were walking we found a bench. We, I guess you know the rest. We kissed. She smiled and said, "You're a good kisser, Marek." I hate being called Marek, but she was my girlfriend. So I let it slide. We walked home and didn't say a word of what we did. David knew, he's like one of those older brothers that know a lot about romance.
Shadow and Elizabeth continued walking, it was late. Really late, but they were awake. They looked up. Apparently some people were having an early Valentine's Day, fireworks were being exploded. "Isn't it beautiful, Elizabeth?" Connor asked, "It is, Connor." They said, and kissed.


E3
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Episode 3: I Didn't Expect it
I decided to go for a walk, and I see an intruder, "How'd he get in here?" I think, I pull out my blades, and strike him down, but I noticed something. His sword... it had blood even though it didn't touch me, did he? "No!" I yelled, running inside the base, I ran as fast I could. I stopped, saw a body. I knew who this person was. Jerome, my dad. I cried, wiped my tears and saw Shadow. "I heard and saw him, I tried chasing him." He sighed. I was furious. I put on my assassin hood, and made a leap of faith into their base. Lucky for me, they had hay. "Get ready for it..." I said, breaking down their door. I assassinated their Lieutenants, and decapitated their general. I ran away after that.
"I saw my best men die to... the kid. The one who survived. I'll get him. But I better sleep first."
It was raining that night. I sat on a bench, and wasn't wearing my suit. I didn't care, I was ready to be attacked. I gave up. I heard footsteps, "Daniel?" The voice said. "Sage..." I said to myself. She walked closer. "Yeah, what?" I replied, "You're supposed to be sleeping." She said. "You're not." I stated. We both sat on the bench. "I-I, my dad was killed." I told her, she understood. She really hasn't seen her monstrous dad.


E4
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Episode 4: Time for a Double Raid
"We were raided!" Connor yelled, and I looked at him. We didn't have our gear on, it was a meeting. "Our people were killed, we couldn't help them! All the children and teens, and adults!" I said, and we checked our chests. Nothing, at all. "We'll get whoever did this." Shade said, and Aurora nodded.
"It wasn't our neighbors. Even though they did kill most of our people. We gotta help them raid the raiders, since they were raided too." David said, and I agreed. We thought of a perfect plan.
"I won't be in disguise!" Both Daniel and Marcus said, without knowing each other said that.
So, on the way Daniel encounters Marcus. Since they didn't know each other's identities, they started talking. "Hey." Daniel said, "Hi." Marcus replied. They both thought they could trust each other. "I'm Daniel." Daniel said, looking at Marcus. "The name's Marcus." Marcus said, smiling. They high fived each other, and Daniel looked back. "I'm gotta go!" Daniel said, "Me too!" Marcus replied, and they ran the same way. Daniel took out his ax and Marcus took out his sword and they reached from the top. "Yah!" They both yelled, assassinating two guards. The alarm goes off, and their teams come. And of course, you'd think they'd fight.
Wrong. It was a truce. "What are they doing?" They both said, running off. The head leader of the clan was there. "This is what you get!" Daniel said, and both him and Marcus kill him.

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Episode 5!
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*cue rock music*
Episode 5: The Final Fight, New Beginning.
I saw to myself thinking, "Can I see Daniel again." Little did I know, I would. Not in a good way.
"I'm done with the war. It ends here!" Connor said, grabbing his gear and walking out to the battlefield. And Daniel carved out, "War starts." On their territory. After they all gathered up, and things were starting. The war, hopefully to be the of change. But wars never change, sadly. And two, new friends find something out.

"Let war, begin!" Daniel said, running after some men. War went on, of course corpses were on the ground. Daniel killed men. Elizabeth, Auroara, Shade and Sage all got in a tent and start collecting weapons. Daniel saw his dad. Jerome Narkas. The went fierce and kept on. All of team members were dying. Connor eas shot, in the chest. Daniel bolted after him. "Connor!" Daniel yelled, with him being angered, he grabbed Connor and left. Elizabeth followed Connor. She sobbed over him, and then she looked at Daniel. "He'll be fine. You fight. Continue." Elizabeth said, and Daniel hugged his soon-to-be sister-in-law. "Take care Liz." Daniel said, running off. David lunged at him and Daniel jumped, kicking his face. An arrow shot Daniel's arm, but he had his armor, so it barely hurt. Daniel ran back and stabbed the archer. Until, the saddest moment. Daniel's eyes opened, he saw Marcus' hood fall off and Daniel's dad, Jerome came. Assassinated his best friend. "Marcus!" Daniel yelled, grabbing the bow. Daniel ran after his dad and killed Jerome. It was raining., and Daniel was on his knees. Only a few people came out. Shade, Sage, Connor, Auroara, And Elizabeth came out. Elizabeth was with Connor. Shade and Auraora looked at each other. Daniel got up, and hugged Sage. Tears came out. "I assassinated my guardian. My step-dad." Daniel said. "I lost my best friend!" He added. Sage and Daniel stopped hugging, and Connor and Daniel look at each other. Daniel looked at Connor straight in the eye. "Don't you die on me." Daniel said.


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Posted: Tue, 10/02/2015 03:25 (9 Years ago)
Episode 1, complete!
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Posted: Wed, 11/02/2015 20:44 (9 Years ago)
Episode 2, finished!
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Posted: Sun, 15/02/2015 03:02 (9 Years ago)
Episode 3 finished. Pretty short, but I tried to continue.
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Posted: Thu, 26/02/2015 01:04 (9 Years ago)
Episode 4, done!
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Posted: Thu, 26/02/2015 02:55 (9 Years ago)
Episode 5, season 1, has been completed.
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Posted: Fri, 10/04/2015 14:59 (9 Years ago)
Chapter 2


A year passed, and Daniel came to the war area. "I just wished, it could've peaceful." Daniel said, looking at his arm. "I'm bionic, nearly a robot. And robot's don't have emotions!" He said, punching the dirt. Connor walked up to Daniel, and picked him up. "Little bro, you're mostly human. Now let's go." Connor said, walking to the village. Suddenly, a spark of electricity hit them. Two people appeared. They looked familiar. "Look who we found, Talon and Shadow." One of them said. "Don't remember us? Oh well maybe this will remind you!" A mutated human appeared. "C-copper!" Immediately, Copper lunged at Daniel and attacked him with his bladed arm. "Connor!" Daniel yelled, but Connor was attacked by another guy, "Remember me? I'm Talon's oldest brother, we've met! I'm Mitchell!" Mitchell said stabbing Connor. The rest of the group came. "Wha-what happened to you guys?" Shade asked, pushing Copper off Daniel. Aurora pushed Mitchell off Connor. Sage looked Copper, in a sad way. "Why...?" She asked, Daniel got up, his pupils turn white. "I can't believe you Copper!" Daniel said, punching Copper at full speed. And then a force of gravity pushed them away. Copper and Mitchell disappeared. Daniel turned to Sage, then Connor. "No... it's happening, again. I thought I stopped it." Daniel said, grabbing Connor and running.