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enderknux
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Posted: Wed, 03/12/2014 23:58 (9 Years ago)

Before we start, note: Do not post on here, or I'll ask a mod to remove you're post, sorry, but it messes up the story. If you want to give any feedback what-so-ever, please PM or pal-pad me. Thank you for your time.

Ok, before we start the story, I'm going to have this first post set aside for info on the characters, and a little bit more of the story-line.

Characters:
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Name | Gender | Nature | Pokemon | Type(s) | Pic | other

Crimson | Male | Brave | Houndoom | Fire/Dark | Coming Soon | none
Fionna | Female | Impish | Sneasel | Dark/Ice | Coming soon | none
Butter | Female | Naive | Luvdisc | Water | Coming Soon | Shiny
Star | Male | Adamant | Swanna | Water/Flying | Coming soon | none
Blade | Male | Lax | Leavanny | Bug/Grass | Coming soon | None
Tsunami | Male | Modest | Frillish | Water/Ghost | Coming soon | None
Grace | female | Serious | Audino | Normal | coming soon | Shiny
Rosy | Female | Quirky | Bellossom | Grass/Poison | Coming soon | none
Ruby | female | ??? | Sableye | Dark/Ghost | Coming soon | None
Sally | Female | unknown | Scrafty| Dark/Fighting | None | Side-character (Credit to Sensgirl25)
Auraora ? Female | unknown | Ghost fusion? | ??? | None " Side character (credit to ~Auraora~)


Credit to people how have helped me with this fan-fic, or things in it.
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Credit to my awesome writing teacher who made me enjoy writing
Credit to all my friends who helped me with everything.
Credit to Pokemon company for creating pokemon.
Credit to Riako for creating the site!
Thank all of you. (more will be added as story moves on) <3


Le Crimson~!


Storyline:
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Pokemon, all owned by the same trainer... but that trainer is gone now. Many, many different pokemon... Caught in many different ways. Some have the power to mega evolve. Other are strange different color, that sparkle. and some, just simple and normal. All of these pokemon live in one huge, giant, biggest ever deserted mansion, once owned by that trainer. They face betrayal, lies, friendship, and secrets. And every so often, a lost trainer will visit. but once one of the unlucky pokemon living there uncovers a special secret, they'll find themselves running, to never come back.



Let the story begin ^-^
(Please pal-pad me if you are interested in making a sprite or art for this fan-fic~)

enderknux
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Posted: Thu, 04/12/2014 00:35 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 1~

*pit... pat... pit...pat...* The rain on the window pattered as Crimson sighed, his pointed tail moving to the howl of the wind. On a dark Autumn's night like this, he had nothing to really do. "what's wrong Crimson?" Fionna asked walking up to Crimson by the window. "Wha... oh. Nothing, Fionna," the brave Houndoom replied. "something must be troubling you...?" The Impish Sneasel replied back, half to herself. Crimson lifted his head to look straight at Fionna, but she wasn't there. " just like her," He mumbled," Always rushing off to figure more junk out,". He signed and got up to start walking, and to his surprise Butter the shiny luvdisc swam by. Sure she was Naive.. but she never came around when he was by, Crimson thought to himself. "Hi---hi Crimson..." He thought he heard her choke. He wasn't sure why she was scared of him anyway, she had the type advantage, A water type like her, against a fire type like him. "Hallo," He nodded to her. He thought she might start talking to him, but instead she just nodded back quietly and swam away. "so much for friends," Crimson mumbled and kept walking.

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Posted: Thu, 04/12/2014 01:33 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 2~

"Hey, did you hear about the news?" Star whispered To Blade as Crimson happened to walk by. " Now what news?" Blade, the normally very lax, Leavanny said. "You haven't herd yet? really? Tsunami told me he saw a lost trainer out side," Star the handsome and adamant Swanna replied. When Crimson overhead this his mind grew cloudy. He raced off through the huge mansion as fast as he could going to find Tsunami. When he finally rushed up to the shocked, Modest, Frillish Crimson didn't have any problems huffing out the words," Who Is Here?". "I don't recall?" The surprised Frillish asked. "The lost trainer... you saw?" Crimson asked. "oh, her...? I dunno she was out front knocking and yelling 'Hello?' loudly," Tsunami said. Crimson nodded his head in thanks and raced off to the front door clearly anxious. Then he slit the door open to see a young trainer and a Scrafty. The Scrafty immediately started calling to Crimson," Oh... Do you live here? My names Sally, and that's my trainer Lenox." Sally said," we need a place to stay for the night...". Crimson caught on and dipped his head," How long will you be staying?" He asked. "Only a night or two. Please?" Sally pleaded. "Oh alright, but don't break anything," Crimson said Leading the two lost travelers inside. " looks like you made a friend Sally," Lenox said cheerfully as Crimson show them to and empty room. "only a night or two," He repeated back at Sally before he too, left and slowly fell into a sleep

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Posted: Thu, 04/12/2014 11:57 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 3~

Crimson woke up, and slowly sagged to the room his had let Sally and her trainer stay in. "Morning? you up?" He called softly, and was greeted by the familiar voice. "Yup!" Sally called back. "Are you leaving today, or tomorrow?" Crimson grunted, half still asleep. "I think later today. We just live in the city, a couple of miles away. So... can we visit every so often... once we leave?" Sally asked. This question awakened Crimson. He slowly and thoughtfully nodded a yes. "Hey, sally can I ask you something?" Crimson asked. "what?" Sally flinched. "Does, Lenox have any friends... other than pokemon. Like humans?" Crimson asked eyeing the Scrafty. "Not that I know of, sorry," She replied. Crimson sighed, as another familiar voice could be heard. "I knew it!" Fionna chanted," You are upset!". "But about what...?" she claimed, and dashed off again. "wha..?" Sally started but Crimson cut her off," Don't ask," he said. Then Sally and Lenox sneaked out of there room and said their good-byes to Crimson. "Now that that's done," Crimson said as he wondered off ," I want to see if I can find Blade!"

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Posted: Fri, 05/12/2014 22:25 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 4~

when Crimson had found blade he sat down with him to talk. "I hear you've been wanting some training," Crimson said as Blade shivered. "yes," Blade hesitated. "And I wanted to ask you, wanna battle?" Crimson replied firmly. "I guess so," Blade shrugged," When?". "Tonight, if you are up for it," Crimson said looking Blade in the eye boldly. Blade and him had been "friendly rivals" since... forever ago. I guess the last time they weren't was, before there trainer left. Blade decided he should kill some time before the battle and got see what the Impish senasel, Fionna was up to. So after Crimson nodded farewell to the Leavanny, he walked off to find Fionna who was playing with Butter. Of coarse, when Crimson saw Butter, he decided it would be better to just take a nap, which he did, with out hesitation.

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Posted: Sat, 06/12/2014 11:36 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 5~

Crimson was awoken by a sharp thing, prodding into his side. "Wake up you sleepy head," Blade said. Crimson got up stretched and yawned, and then said to blade," You ready?". "As I'll ever be," Blade said, but Crimson could see him flinch. Together the walked out side of the giant mansion, and without a doubt, Crimson recognized a small golden luvdisc swimming the the fountain. Crimson thought it'd be better to leave her alone, but he didn't back down. See her made him wonder why she was afraid of him, 'maybe all his scars? or the pointed tail? I don't understand, but if I win this battle... It might make her ether Impressed, or more scared.' He thought. then Blade distracted his train of thoughts, and the battle started. It started out like a normal battle, both sides putting there effort. ' But I'm not going to lose on purpose just to get some scardy-cat shiny thing I'm not as brave and though as I really am.' Crimson thought, using a super effective Flame thrower. "Ugh, I wasn't ready for that," Blade said grinning, while he tripped Crimson with grass not. Crimson had notice Butter looked more interested than scared, but he kept his focus on blade, and used Crunch. Then they called time, so nobody really got hurt. "Draw?" Blade offered. "You bet, but I'm gonna win next time!" Crimson grinned at blade. Then Blade went back inside the mansion, and that left Himself and butter, alone. Together. "hallo Butter," Crimson said, hopefully.

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Posted: Sat, 06/12/2014 13:10 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 6~

"You... you battled well," Butter choked out. Crimson could help it so he blurted out," Why are you so scared of me anyway? Is it my scars? Tell it's the Scars?". "Wha...? Ok I guess I've gotta tell you now," She confessed, sounding almost ashamed. "I'm fond of you, Your bravery, boldness, skills in battle. I guess I get so jealous that I can't be like that. Brave, or strong," Butter sighed. "Don't worry," Crimson touched his tail to her," You are shiny. Do you know how many pokemon wish the where?". "yeah, I guess," Butter started but them Grave, the shiny audio and Rosy the Gloom came running out. "Guys! Look what Rosy found!" Grace chanted running up to Crimson and Butter. "Wat?" Crimson echoed. "Follow me! I found a giant supply of evolution items Stored away in a safe!" Rosy said joyfully. Grace, Rosy, Butter, and Crimson ran into the mansion, and followed Rosy into the safe. "WOAH!" Butter's eyes gleamed. The Gloom, Rosy, Starters to look at the stones than tripped, and fell right on top of a sun-stone. "WHA-?" She said as she started to glow. Rosy was evolving into a Bellossom. Rosy got up and looked at herself in a cracked mirror nearby. "Did I just... Evolve?" She said. "Yes," Is all Crimson said.

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Posted: Thu, 11/12/2014 00:33 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 7~

"whoa cool then!" Rosy said. "hisssssssssssss" Ruby hissed. "What's Up Ruby?" Grace tried to call cheerfully. Everyone in the room, Crimson, Butter, Grace, and Rosy knew Ruby, was odd. "GeMs! MoRe GeMs!" Ruby said scattering around like a maniac. "wellllll....?" Butter muttered, very confused. "Well, I'd hate to be rude," Crimson said rolling his eyes, as he knew Ruby could care less," But, I'm gonna, just go,". He stalked out of the room as Ruby said more about Gems. Crimson knew well that Sableye like her ate gems, and they're weren't many gems in the mansion. Butter swam after him and they walked together out the door. "well, I'd be embarrassed for her," Butter said. "Yeah... that girl has issues," Crimson chuckled. "Well... then again, it's like like there's much to do her anymore. Maybe we should go hang with Aurora? She's pretty cool, you know, being a fusion AND a ghost in all," Crimson asked Butter. "Yeah, let's do that!" Butter said as the walked down the hall .
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Posted: Wed, 17/12/2014 12:01 (9 Years ago)

~Chapter 8~

Butter and Crimson were going to see Aurora, but she had found them first. "Hey guys!" She said sticking her ghostly head threw the wall. "We were just looking for you!" Butter called. "I heard, that's why I came," Aurora said happily. "Listen, I need to ask you something," Crimson muttered. "what is it?" Aurora asked puzzled. "What was it like when," Crimson started but Butter cut him of," So, do ya'll wanna go like, do something? Or are we just gonna sit here?" Butter asked. "Yeah! We should do something!" Aurora Replied and she and Butter floated of, leaving Crimson there, alone. "well, ok. Good talk," He muttered as he walked of. "So much for questions,".