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Posted: Fri, 02/08/2013 01:52 (10 Years ago)

Spelling's not my thing, but grammar is. Changes are bolded. Also, while it's not related to the English language, the link "Learn more about Rumbling" doesn't go anywhere.

Just wanted to add that I commend you for even attempting to make a site in a foreign language! (Y)

Regarding Rumble Area:

Hey dude, welcome to my Rumble Station!

You simply equip one of your Pokémon with an Explorer Bag and then send it out on a Rumble Mission for a set duration in a specific area.

A couple minor adjustments that are purely personal preference:

Their Pokémon fight battles, gain experience and may sometimes find some items, too. Missing Oxford comma before "and."

Having the words "and also" consecutively is unnecessary; "and" would work by itself.

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