I’m back woah!!

-Sylphie —> Revv

So I’ve watched the same scene on repeat for the past hour and a half and it’s still making me wheeze

It’s just the same guy whispering “I wish you were dead” to his roommate over and over and over again and I’m actually in tears it’s so stupid but I cant stop laughing and I don’t know w h y

Forks are better than Spoons thank you for your time

Some writing tips I guess??:


• Villains shouldn’t be obsessed with the same character all the time*. This gets boring to read, no matter how good the rest of the characters are. It makes the story feel repetitive. Change things up a bit!! Have the villains be focused on different characters for different reasons.
*(— especially if the bad guy changes a lot. When a new villain takes the stage, please give them development. Don’t make them exactly the same as the previous. Please.)

• Remember that not everything needs to revolve around the main character. Don’t forget about your other characters too.
(Give your side characters development too please)

• Rivals are usually fueled by emotion, rather than logic- but not always. And don’t forget, not all rivals are mean. You can have friendly rivals too.


Feel free to add on, I might keep going in the comments