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Redstar's Journey (A SilverClan Story)

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Posted: Tue, 03/05/2016 04:17 (8 Years ago)
Dedicated to Expiate, who made the role-play that started this fan fiction.
(Note: this takes place between a lot before Into the Wild and The Darkest Hour. Don't post here.)
BTW I had to research, so I got some cats from the SilverClan RP. Don't sue me XD


Allegiances
(Updated every page)
Leader-
Coalstar

Deputy-
Maplefeather

Warriors-
Snowstrike, Mousegleam, Yellowpelt, Orangefur, Toadleaf, Fuzzypelt, Lionstep, Hornleaf, Foxnose, Peakfur, Badgerclaw, Eaglescreech, Dewpelt, Starfall,

Apprentices-
Whitepaw, Mockpaw, Petalpaw, Redpaw, Emberpaw, Moonpaw, Riverpaw, Tailpaw

Kits-
Goldkit, Rainkit, Lakekit, Weedkit, Skykit, Fawnkit, Sparrowkit, Warmkit, Frogkit, Dapplekit, Specklekit, Snowkit, Heronkit

Elders-
Troutfern, Fireberry, Tawnyberry, Leopardclaw, Deadwhisker


Queens-
Graypelt (Mother of Toadleaf's kits, Rainkit, Weedkit, and Lakekit)
Duskflower (Mother of Lionstep's kits, Fawnkit, Sparrowkit, Skykit [Who later becomes a kittypet named Sky] and Moonpaw [From an earlier litter])
Flowerfern (Mother of Peakfur's kits, Goldkit and Warmkit)
Hawkwillow (Mother of Eaglescreech's kits, Frogkit, Dapplekit, Specklekit, Snowkit, and Heronkit)
Treefern (Expecting Dewpelt's kits)


Cat/Apprentice-
Featherfall



Rules:
Don't post here. ANYTHING. At all. If you do, you get reported.Simple as that.
If you want your character to appear FROM SILVERCLAN RP, PalPad/PM me.

Redstar was fighting against a cruel BloodClan cat. With a swipe of the cats paw, Redstar had lost his final life. As he died, he remembered his past, all the things he had done....
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Posted: Tue, 03/05/2016 20:23 (8 Years ago)
"Hey Snowstrike, Orangefur had her kits! Want to go see them?" a cat asked. The white she-cat Snowstrike said "Oh sure Maplefeather!". As they walked to the nursery, they heard the medicine cat, Onetail, said "Redkit survived." Orangefur and Yellowpelt had had 3 kits: Applekit, Juniperkit, and Redkit. However, the cold was too much, and sadly, Applekit and Juniperkit didn't make it. Orangefur saw the cats walk into the nursery. "Have you come here to see my kit?" she asked. Snowstrike and Maplefeather nodded.
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Posted: Thu, 05/05/2016 21:50 (8 Years ago)
Redkit's eyes opened. He saw several cats in the nursey, some familiar ones. He recognized his mother Orangefur and father Yellowpelt.He also recognized several other queens and kits. But when he saw Snowstrike and Maplefeather, he ran to hide under his mom's stomach. Orangefur laughed "Don't worry Redkit. They won't hurt you."
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Snowstrike laughed. "Maplefeather, want kits like those?" Maplefeather jumped up, laughing as well. "Not yet Snowstrike!" Redkit turned around facing Orangefur. "Where are Applekit and Juniper kit?" He asked. "I want to play with them!" Orangefur turned away and lied down. "Applekit and Juniperkit are dead Redkit." Yellowpelt said. Redkit started meowing sadly "They can't be dead! I just saw them a while ago! Mom, they aren't dead, right! Yellowpelt is lying!" Orangefur replied, with her voice cracking. "Yellowpelt isn't lying. Applekit and Juniperkit have died." Redkit started crying.
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Yellowpelt sighed. "We must make sure Redkit survives. He is our only kit." Orangefur nodded. Snowstrike and Maplefeather walked out of the nursery. Suddenly, out of nowhere, a tortoiseshell she-cat burst into the nursey. "Echostar has been murdered!" She exclaimed. Every cat started walking out the nursey. They saw Echostar's body, lying limply on the ground. Then Yellowpelt said "Coalpelt will be our new leader."

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After Coalpelt got his 9 lives and became Coalstar, he said "My deputy will be Maplefeather. Every cat started talking at once. "Is this a good idea?" One said. "He doesn't have a lot of experience!" Another said. "I trust Maplefeather will do a good job." replied Coalstar. "But who murdered Echostar?" Snowstrike asked. A grim reply came from Coalstar "A BloodClan warrior." Angry calls came from the cats. "Where is BloodClan territory? We must avenge Echostar! Why would they do it?"


(BTW, does anyone from the SilverClan role-play want to be Maplefeather/ Snowstrike's kits?PalPad me.)
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Posted: Mon, 09/05/2016 23:13 (8 Years ago)

Title: Update

-I'm going to be drawing the characters from here, so vote in my poll in my user page! Also subscribe to the SilverClan Wiki thread for more information.-
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Posted: Wed, 11/05/2016 23:52 (8 Years ago)
Coalstar said "Everyone, calm down. We WILL get revenge for Echostar. However, we cannot just launch an attack on BloodClan. BloodClan has strong warriors that will be ready at a moments notice." Maplefeather said "I'll arrange a patrol to go spy on BloodClan." Coalstar nodded "But you better be on lookout for ShadowClan and Tigerstar. I've heard rumors from the other clans that ShadowClan is working with BloodClan to take over the forest. If we are unsuccessful, we will be kicked out like the clan SkyClan."
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Posted: Fri, 13/05/2016 00:18 (8 Years ago)
Maplefeather said "We wil set out tomorrow. In the meantime, we must be prepared.". When the meeting ended, all the cats drifted away. Coalstar was stairing in the distance.


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Scourge was talking to his gang of loners and rouges. "I can already tell that SilverClan will try to kill me for Echostar's death." Then a cat yowled "But you didn't do it!" Scourge responded "Patience my friend. I have a plan to kill them from the inside for accusing me."
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Posted: Wed, 18/05/2016 21:24 (8 Years ago)
Several moons later....
After Maplefeather and Snowstrike's kits were born, SilverClan was attacked by BloodClan. The entire clan was devastated, and several kits were made into apprentices before 6 moons. Those kits were Redkit, Emberkit, and Moonkit.
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"Petalkit, get your brothers, Mockkit and Whitekit." Snowstrike said. Maplefeather had nearly been killed in the fighting. He now layed in the medicine cat's den. Coalstar was standing on the high rock. "Cats of SilverClan, I'm afraid I bring terrible news. I've decided that SilverClan must move far from the forest." Several screeches came from the cats. But they new their leader was right. BloodClan would kill them if they stayed.
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Posted: Mon, 23/05/2016 18:25 (8 Years ago)
Emberpaw scratched Redpaw and said "Think you can survive the journey?" Redpaw tackled her. "Of course I can!" Moonpaw sighed "If we don't get left behind, that is!" While the three apprentices were laughing, the medicine cat, Cloudblaze, was talking to Emberpaw's mother, Flamegleam. "StarClan has sent me signs. I can foretell that Emberpaw will not make it through the journey." Cloudblaze told her. Suddenly, Flamegleam started slashing at Cloudblaze. "No! It can't be true! She is my only kit since Thundertail drowned!" Cloudblaze shook her of. "I'm afraid you can't deny what StarClan has said. Emberpaw will die in the journey." Then, a lone shadow steamed through the medicine cat den. "Let her go, Clodblaze. She can think what she wants." Coalstar yowled."StarClan lies to us. And just to make sure you don't spread lies..." Coalstar said as he bit on Cloudblaze's neck, "...YOU will go to StarClan, to join your lying friends." Cloudblaze struggled to get free, but in an instant, Coalstar snapped Cloudblaze's neck. Flamegleam stared at her leader. "What have you done?" She screeched. Coalstar called a meeting. "I'm afraid I bring terrible news. The medicine cat, Cloudblaze, has been murdered!" He screeched. The medicine cat apprentice, Featherpaw, stood up. "Tell me who murdered him!" He yelled. "I will avenge him!" Coalstar put on a grim face. "It was, none other than, Flamegleam." Cats stared in shock at the red she-cat. She jumped up. "I did not! I'm innocent!" She pleaded. "What should we do with you?" Coalstar asked his clan. Several cats said "Kill her!". However, Featherpaw calmed down and spoke. "She should be exiled." Most cats agreed, and Flamegleam was exiled and became Flame.
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Flame was then run far out of SilverClan territory. Emberpaw then broke down in tears. "No! Flamegleam! Coalstar, my mother would never do that! She is innnocent!" Coalpelt silenced her with a look. He then jumped off the rock. "Be careful of BloodClan." he told everyone.
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A few moons later, Whitekit, Petalkit, and Mockkit became appprentices. While on a hunting party, Mockpaw strayed from the group and moved to the edge of a fence. There he herd a group of cats. The cats took one look Sr him and jumped towards him. "Let him go." he said. Mockpaw said toward him "Who are you?'' The cat replied with a smile,"I am Scourge. Welcome to BloodClan."
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Coalstar sat in his den. His deep voice laughed. "Those mouse-brained cats don't know I killed Echostar. That old hack might have ruined my plans. My plans to destroy SilverClan and make a new clan of my liking." He then summoned all the cats. "Is everybody ready?" he asked. Everybody nodded. "Good. Tommorow, we leave for the mountains."
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Redpaw and Emberpaw were in the apprentice's den. Redpaw whispered in Emberpaw's ear "During the journey, I will protect you. Nothing will ever harm you." Emberpaw giggled and wrapped her tail with his tail. "You're always protecting me like a kit." she said. Redpaw blushed. "Its just that, when we become warriors... I want to be your mate." Emberpaw blushed as well. "Yes. I would like to be your mate as well."

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The next morning, the clan set out. Featherfall, who was once the medicine cat named Featherpaw, had restocked his herb supply the night before. The first stop on the trip was to cross the river, which was very dangerous. Many cats have drowned trying to do anything in it. Even the best RiverClan swimmers would stand no chance against this river. Coalstar stepped first, then Maplefeather, followed by the apprentices, elders, queens and kits, and finally the warriors. But as Toadleaf stepped on a rock, he slipped and fell into the river the water threw him savagely until his head crashed into a rock. Graypelt, Toadleaf's mate, screeched with horror "Save him!" Maplefeather and Lionstep pulled him towards shore and onto dry land. "Save him, Featherfall." she cried.
Toadleaf laid his tail on her flank. "I am sorry" he told her. "It is too late, my sweet." Graypelt licked him. "No. No, it's not." she wailed. "Featherfall will heal you." Toadleaf then rasped his final words,"I will wait for you in StarClan. Take care of our kits. I...love you." With that, Toadleaf's eyes slowly closed, and his body laided on the floor, lifeless and cold to the touch. "Toadleaf. No, Toadleaf. Stay with me. Don't go!" she wailed her grief. Graypelt's kits, Rainkit, Weedkit, and Lakekit wailed with their mother. Featherfall looked at Redpaw. "How many cats will die in this journey?" Redpaw could not answer. He stared in shock at Toadleaf's body asking himself, How many cats will die? Then he thought, StarClan, please watch over the cats of SilverClan..
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As the journey continued, Redpaw stuck close to Emberpaw. They next had to climb up a mountain, which was very dangerous. The apprentices started climbing up that monstrous rock. Riverpaw, however, was never really as strong as the other apprentices. When he tried to climb up, but his claw slipped, and he fell down faster that a rain drop. His mother, Fuzzypelt, saw Riverpaw falling down and tried to grab him, but couldn't. "Riverpaw! My son!" she screamed. All the cats could do was hear Riverpaw yowl, then they heard a faint snap. Fuzzypelt burst into tears, and her mate Hornleaf went to confort her. When they reached the top of the mountain, Coalstar rose. "We must camp-out in this cave." he said. "It's getting too cold to be outside.
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As the cats gathered in the cave, they started making nests. Warriors and apprentices made their mear in a circle around the leader, deputy, queen, kits, and elders. Redpaw made his nest next to Emberpaw, who licked Redpaw's ear. Coalstar then said "It is getting too cold outside, but we are not far from the Moonstone. We can gather rocks from there to block the door. Then, we can get out through the back way." As the cats went, they gathered many rocks, mostly boulders and rolled them to the cave. They stacked up the rocks and covered the door. However, one day later, as the cats were getting ready to leave, Coalstar was walking near the blocked entrance, when suddenly the rocks fell and landed on him. Featherfall rushed there alongside other cats. They pushed the rocks off, but too many landed on him, and the scene was too graphic to describe. Featherfall checked him, then said in horror, "He lost all of his lives." Shocked yowls were going through the cats, then Alderfern stated "Maplefeather is going to become clan leader.
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When they came back from the Moonstone, Maplestar appointed Dewpelt as deputy. Then he stated,"We must leave the cave to continue the journey."
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As the cats walked out of the cave, they saw a hawk circling overhead. "To the bushes!" Maplestar roared. As he dove, his tortoiseshell fur camoflauged into the bushes. Weedkit was slower, and the hawk dove down fast. Deathpelt tried to grab the kit, but it was too late. The hawk had grabbed the kit and flew away. Graypelt wailed "First Toadleaf, now Weedit? Why StarClan? Why me? Why?". Redpaw was traumatized. Toadleaf, Coalstar, Weedkit. This must be a journey were only the strongest will prevail. Then he looked at Emberpaw, then the clan. Who will be next? he wondered with a shudder.
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Redpaw kept on walking near his clan. If they were to find a new territory, they would have to go beyond any cat has ever gone. He felt Emberpaw's warm fur brush against his. '' Hurry up slowpoke!" she laughed. Then she kept on going. Redpaw laughed then looked at his mother, Orangefur. She had been sick ever since the journey started, and soon, she would be old enough to join the elders alongside Yellowpelt. Redpaw was scared that Orangefur might not survive. He walked up to his mother. "Are you alright?" Redpaw asked Orangefur. The orange cat gave a light laugh. "Don't worry youngster." Orangefur said. "I am still strong enough to do this." Redpaw stayed close to his mother. He did not want to loose him, just as he lost his sister Juniperkit and his brother Applekit. He kept on following Maplestar and Featherfall, as StarClan guided them.
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Posted: Fri, 21/10/2016 18:57 (8 Years ago)
Maplestar looked at the area they were in. He sniffed the air, and Redpaw did the same. His fur stood on end as he recognized the smell. "Dog!' Maplestar yowled, as a dog burst from the trees. Redpaw ran after Emberpaw as she ran as fast as a Twoleg monster. The dog was gaining on them, and Redpaw was near the from. He might have gotten eaten if his father Yellowpelt was not slower than he was. The dog grabbed Yellowpelt's tail and started biting him. "Father!" Redpaw yowled as he jumped onto the dog. The rest of the clan followed, and the dog ran away. Redpaw bent down to sniff his father fur, but his skin was cold. Instantly, Redpaw knew what happened: Yellowpelt was dead.
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Maplestar halted. "We have found the place." It had been three sunrises since Yellowpelt's death, and both Orangefur and Redpaw were saddened. If only he had lived a few more days... Redpaw thought. Maplestar called a clan meeting then called Redpaw and Moonpaw up forth. "Do you both accept the title of SilverClan warrior?'' Maplestar asked. Without hesitating, Redpaw and Moonpaw both said "Yes!" Maplestar purred, " Then from now on, Redpaw, you shall be known as Redwhisker. Moonpaw, you shall from now on be known as Moonleap." Redwhisker was excited, but also saddened. Emberpaw had been sick since we made it here. She she should have gotten her warrior name, too. "Remember," Maplestar said, "You must sit a silent vigil all night. And now, I have one more announcement. Orangefur has decided to move to the elder's den." Redwhisker looked at his mother. She was still a moon away from becoming an elder! "Thank you, Maplestar. I have served my clan well. It's just that, Applekit and Juniperkit's deaths made me sad, and now Yellowpelt's death has made me want to retire." Maplestar called the end of the clan meeting, and they all parted ways.